touch me
please me
my happy ever after
lusty sinner
dripping wet
blood~
crying for love
soft and swollen
heart broken
never felt this high
screaming
through the night
Amanda PotterĀ©: 2019 Poetry Marathon
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
touch me
please me
my happy ever after
lusty sinner
dripping wet
blood~
crying for love
soft and swollen
heart broken
never felt this high
screaming
through the night
Amanda PotterĀ©: 2019 Poetry Marathon
I really like the word choice in this poem. The line “lust sinner” was just good and this is where I wish I was better at commenting on peoples work. I can’t place why I like it. The line length I think worked really well too. Which I don’t think I could have gotten it to work so well.
glad you enjoyed it. always nervous with pieces like this