Water drops keep falling
From the shower head
Stinging my skin
As i wash away
My daily sins
Floral scented suds
Mirrors steam over
Hiding the tears I cry, as
Water drops keep falling
From the shower head
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Water drops keep falling
From the shower head
Stinging my skin
As i wash away
My daily sins
Floral scented suds
Mirrors steam over
Hiding the tears I cry, as
Water drops keep falling
From the shower head
“Stinging my skin/As i wash away/My daily sins”
This is wonderful imagery, powerful and evocative.