If I could
save time in a bottle
I’d like to
Everyday til eternity
Make the days
Last forever
Words, make wishes come true
Walk through
the fields of
Time
~ flows
Saved
like a treasure
Around long enough
to know
A box of wishes
Dreams
that never came true
Empty~ except for
the memory
Of you
I like how you weave a Jim Croce classic into this poem! Nicely done! It really conveys the notion of time fading away!
There is something like a wistful, knowing melancholy which this poem invokes, a whisper into time eternal reminding the forgotten that they are never truly lost, all while slipping further away ourselves.
Wonderful writing.
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Darren Syme Coremans (@dscoremans)
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