Her yawning curves
An hourglass of gunpowder
Buttons straining
3 thoughts on “Hour 22 – At The Diner”
Damn! Sexy or what?! There’s an ocean of imagery – and combustible woman! – packed into this haiku! You’ve created such a powerful and memorable character in only a few lines: gorgeous!
hard to add much to Anne’s comment except to second what she said. very compact and evocative. love the simplicity of the words and the huge impact of the imagery
Damn! Sexy or what?! There’s an ocean of imagery – and combustible woman! – packed into this haiku! You’ve created such a powerful and memorable character in only a few lines: gorgeous!
I know, right?! Making this was oh so satisfying 🙂
hard to add much to Anne’s comment except to second what she said. very compact and evocative. love the simplicity of the words and the huge impact of the imagery