4 thoughts on “Hour 23 – Sulfurica

  1. I like the use of indentations- the form of this poem reminds me of a saw.

    I like this little poem, and I think it could go on. The only word that stuck out as a bit odd is “butter.”

    Thanks for sharing!

  2. Odd, because it is so short it seems like a riddle, and I had many guesses that almost fit, because I ignored the title.
    they told about me…
    You know that some of us ignore the title?

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