Floatation only works when both bodies cannot sync.
On the day my brother first learnt
To swim, someone died with
A strange song in their mouth.
The wind would then crack my
Mother’s healthy lungs and plant
An ache, the size of a cough.
Our house would then open
And swallow condolences.
Ours mouths would then sing
And squeeze hope-prayers.
Our songs would then break
And fill all the pores on our bodies.
Our God would then open me to reality,
On the day my brother first learnt to swim,
His body and the river were both made of
Light so they sync, the river would then
Flow and casts its burden by the shore,
Where my brothers water-filled body
Would later be found —sync.
I was moved by this poem, and I’m so sad for this tragic loss. The rhythm and repetition in the lines felt like each one was dropping me into the next. Thank you for sharing this.