sometimes it feels like i live in a memory
feels like i’ve done this before
hurt like this, loved like this, laughed like this
it’s like deja vu
but somehow it’s still new
somehow i still don’t know what to do
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
sometimes it feels like i live in a memory
feels like i’ve done this before
hurt like this, loved like this, laughed like this
it’s like deja vu
but somehow it’s still new
somehow i still don’t know what to do
I love this. It is so raw and able to relate to. I think in a way, we all sometimes feel like this. It really hit home with me. I appreciate you sharing this. It is wonderful.
i’m so glad you could relate!
These lines at the end
. . . deja vu
. . . still new
. . . what to do
compelled me to return and read again, ending with a specific “listen” for the repeating lines. I am struggling with the flow of rhymes and lists during these brief writing periods, so I’m more attuned to reading them now. Fun poem!
thank you!
It’s always new and always the same and after awhile, you can sort of skate over the pain like it was ice. (I should copy this for a poem,)
Ohhh that would be a good poem! But also, I am definitely getting to that point in some thing where I can skate over the pain.
Good!