Deep booms shake the Earth
as trains belch out smoke
formed as a result of their undigested
coal lunches.
Clanking and screeching of
metal dragged against metal
blending into the cacophony of sound
erupting from every corner.
Elbowing, stomping and kicking.
Frantic agitated people
raged inside until,
deep booms shake the Earth.
So original, very interesting!
Lovely, crisp analogy. First stanza captivates.
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