2019: In response to Prompt 2
Written by: H.J ©️
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Magic is your eyes;
The way they sparkle with passion,
and play like butterflies.
Magic is your heart;
The way it pounds with pleasure,
And views life as treasure.
Magic is your laugh;
So light and true.
Magic was ours –
On the day I fell in love with you.
The little rhyming (eyes / butterflies, pleasure / treasure,
true / you) pairs throughout had me return again and again, and they brought forward the life of your poem because there was movement with each. The simple theme of love and magic is sweet, and I find it refreshing on these hot summer days.
Thanks so much ♥️
It means a lot to me that the love I have for this person can come through so clearly, and that you felt compelled to keep returning to the poem.