Don’t ask me how my trip went
Don’t ask me what I bought
Instead, let me tell you what I saw.
While walking on the main street
The heart of the city
Behold, there stood a storefront
With bold sign in the big gigantic letter
P-E-R-I-W-I-N-K-L-E
But a symbol of a flower represented the I
Beside it was a gumboot skyscraper
Its needle peak is seen among the cloud
The store though different
Stood magnificent
Showing an alluring art
Of the unseen and the unthinkable
Though unexpected but amazing
The myriad flowers were arranged in a periwinkle shell
A shell colored in haste but stylishly beautiful
Gone were the slimy slime
Or the snail host
For the shell preferred the flowers
To the snails.
Great images. Just in thing, you don’t need the word ‘of’ after the word ‘myriad’. This will strengthen the line if you edit it out. Well done though.
Thanks, Jane. I will make the changes.