The sun peeking out of treetops
Is a beautiful sight
The red flowers on the highest branches
Reflect the rays just right
The crow family cawing at the sun?
They just like things that are bright
The early morning dew shines
Like pearls scattered on sands white
Under the same blue sky
A painted picture of true delight.
(Context of the poem: Every one is a poet in early morning hours… Philosopher as well? They certainly feel at peace.. one with all nature ¯\_(ツ)_/¯)
I love the visuals in this poem. It made me think and nod at how you said the crows just like things bright so they caw at the sun! It is true how we seem to find peace in the early morning hours. Thank you!
Thank you for reading! ^^
I love this poem’s playfulness. This poem and rhyming couplets add a wonderful tone to the poem…Beautiful lines such as “the sun peeking out from the treetops.” Well done!
This is my choice in terms of submitting a poem. I love the playful images and the lyricism of the poem! One comment though as you may wish to shorten the title…