A soft wind carries
our laughs, our voices
to reach the distant-most memories
The water is cold
I don’t like it but
it’s still fun
To dance in the rain
with you.
My heart is full of warmth
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
A soft wind carries
our laughs, our voices
to reach the distant-most memories
The water is cold
I don’t like it but
it’s still fun
To dance in the rain
with you.
My heart is full of warmth
At this rate every poem by you is going to get a comment it feels like. This one is very reminiscent of haiku in both its rhythm and style. Each stanza is its own snapshot yet they flow into each other like a 3 tiered cake. I love it.