Bitter Endings
Too bright the light
For these old eyes
They see only darkness now
Turn down the sun
Let light be damned
Let dawn await my dusk
Too fast the world
For these old bones
They seek only comfort now
Turn off the gears
Let progress pause
Hold tomorrow ‘til my day is done
Too cold the wind
For this old skin
Worn thin as paper now
Turn up the heat
Let oceans rise
Someone else will pay my bill
Too strange the times
For this old mind
It cannot comprehend
Turn back the clock
Undo the lies
The truest way is mine
Turn down, turn off
Turn up, turn back
What harm?
I’ll be gone soon
Too bright, too fast
Too cold, too strange
Though it may be
Too late for you
I like this even though it feels very sad. Keep up the good work.
It’s actually meant to be cynical. Consider this quote:
“I’m fed up to the ears with old men dreaming up wars for young men to die in.”
― George S. McGovern
Excellent use of structure and repetition
Very emotional