Running Posted on September 3, 2023 9:01am EDT by Cynthia Hernandez Running on empty. Running out of time. Always running, rarely resting. Now Iām running out of rhyme.
This is short, sweet and very concise. I love the alliteration and lines running on empty and now running out of time. So true! Reply
I like your work running. I have a few poems I would like to have published and if I think is Save might share them with you though I have posted some on my LinkedIn page.You can check them out on Ebiye Derick Ogidiga Reply
There’s a succinct brilliance to this… the substitution of ‘rhyme’ for time nails it!
I had to smile! That resonated – me in a nutshell! Thank you.
Nice. It made me laugh. Good job for number 24.
That made me laugh … thank you š
This is short, sweet and very concise. I love the alliteration and lines running on empty and now running out of time. So true!
Oops..I might rhyme substituted for time. Brilliant substitution and just in the nick of time!
I like your work running. I have a few poems I would like to have published and if I think is Save might share them with you though I have posted some on my LinkedIn page.You can check them out on Ebiye Derick Ogidiga