blue petals
folded & pressed
flattened white veined
solar systems all your own
in the center
busha’s face
laughing at
my vision
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
blue petals
folded & pressed
flattened white veined
solar systems all your own
in the center
busha’s face
laughing at
my vision
What a perfect moment that’s captured accurately and delicately in this poem! I love these details – and the idea of a solar system of markings caught in the centre of the flower – such a sense of finding ourselves in the universe. Beautiful!
I agree with Anne McMaster!! Beautiful rendering from the prompt…
Anne McMaster has put it so well. Your opening lines pulled me into the poem… “folded & pressed” Good work!
Perfect and harmonic lines. I love “solar systems all your own.” Great job!