Not succeeding in a suicide attempt
The girl finds herself in an asylum
With her heart damaged
Unsure of a life
She waits for death to come
As she sees life with a different perspective
Admires the beauty of nature from her window
The grey Ljubljana mornings
She endures the changes within
Nearing her extinction
Unaware of her gut feelings
Her survival instincts holding up
She has a lovely life
Family, friends at the beck of her call
Lacking a direction in life
She seems so lost
She thinks only about life
As if life is unfair
Trying to find her niche
Deciding of the dark thought
As the story unfolds
She is hopeful of much more from life
Strives to listen to her own emotions
Bringing alive the urge to survive
Your character is extremely smart. Except answers on the outside lead to the right ones within, there’s no better place to look or listen. Very smart girl. 🙂
Glad you ended it on an optimistic note. Life is too precious to be thrown away on a moment ofvweakness. Your words will shine a ray of hope on desperate souls standing on edge.
Kudos
Thank you so much