Simplicity
Is it wrong to not want more
To not have the energy to go out and get
To get up and go
To push harder
And be more
The world sets a frenetic pace
I feel I should be striving for something
Anything
Everything
To be seen to succeed
Is it wrong to not want more
The world sets a frenetic pace
To work relentlessly
To become the élite
But I don’t want any of that
I just want simplicity
[Prompt: The Gigan – must be 16 lines in length with seven stanzas (each stanza is separated by a line break). It goes couplet (two lines), tercet (three lines), couplet, couplet, couplet, tercet, couplet.
The first line is also the eleventh line, line six is repeated as line 12 as well.]
I like what you’re done here. The re is a rising tension and frustration that gets diffused on the very last word – simplicity. Nice.
Good Gigan!