the still point
of the turning gyre
that’s where i am
when around me
chaos reigns
the still point of the
churning ocean
that’s where i am
when creation nudges
the still point
of the mists of time
that’s where hope blossoms
that’s where i am
I love the atmosphere and overall feel of this poem. The imagery is beautiful!!! One suggestion…first stanza has an extra line..”…when chaos reigns (one line) might flow better than”when chaos flows/all around me.”
Thank you for your feedback. Yes, I will edit as you’ve suggested. Grateful.