running, that’s how they
name the hot
loo breeze
as it sweeps
over
the land
the desert sand
shimmers
like the
skin of one
running
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
running, that’s how they
name the hot
loo breeze
as it sweeps
over
the land
the desert sand
shimmers
like the
skin of one
running
I love the imagery here!!! Congratulations to you for working with such a difficult prompt to begin with and end with running and to weave together. such beautiful imagery!!! “The desert sand/ shimmers/ like the/ skin of/one one running.” Yes, it does!