where we were
you pointed your gun
at the sea, at the sand
at me. said love was
invincible. pretended
everything was a blast.
so why did it all end …
in a flash of brilliant
bright light & cordite’s
bitter stink
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where we were
you pointed your gun
at the sea, at the sand
at me. said love was
invincible. pretended
everything was a blast.
so why did it all end …
in a flash of brilliant
bright light & cordite’s
bitter stink
I like the cadence and the tightness of the word choice. Great poem.