Prompt 22. Choose a title from the five offered. Write a poem. I have. & it may be the best poem of my career. Either that or I am incredibly tired. But let’s go with the former.
Möbius’ Strip
she sure wasn’t
the greatest dancer
in the world
or even the club
but she had this
amazing way
of bending minds
so you never knew
if she was taking clothes off
or putting them back on
Perfect. Just perfect. The clever play of it.
Very VERY clever! I spent a LONG time working on the mobius strip when I used it in a ski-fi play many years ago, but you win hands-down: the economy here and the playfulness with which you handle this concept is super!
And that was meant to be sci-fi – not ski-fi (unless I’ve invented another genre – oops!).