While reading something
i think of the last line
Its so important
More than the first one
The firsts make you move ahead
And the lasts stays with you
No matter how long it was
Many years may pas.
one always remembers
The lasts
The last kiss
A last hug
The last goodbye
His face,
When we met the last time.
The last line
keeps all of the things
It embraces
All the flaws
And still makes you remember
The sweet memories
The last line
is our true companion
Which remains with us
The whole life..
Well said and good thought elaborated. Please make edits to grammar and it will sound perfect.
I like how you move from firsts to lasts and how both are equally important
Yes, firsts and lasts are ever-lasting. I agree with Vijaya; edit or have somebody edit your lovely poem. 🙂
Hardier – this is a beautifully expressed poem: the idea of remembering the last things which happen to us is so powerful!
A strong and memorable thought.
Look at the last line of your poem.
Could you manage to end with “We remember the last line?” It would be fun.