This is what I imagine
Being a zombie feels like
Or a ghost reliving the same nightmare
Night after night after night
There is something supernatural
Something sinister about hour 22
You know the end is near
But it is out of your grasp
Your feet are being held down
Your brain screams for release
But no one can hear you
You reach out but there is nothing
to hold onto
You can do nothing but wait
Write and wait
Wait and write
The clock ticks
Ever so slowly
A time warp
A poet’s loop
A poem, on top of another poem, on top of another poem
Wait and write, write and wait
Try not to let the clock
ticking and tocking
control you.
I remember that feeling at about this hour…part delirium, part frenetic anticipation.
You drew the picture well.
You’ve captured that 22nd hour well…I remember waking from a nap with a start thinking I had lost it…It was a crazy first time for me…Well expressed!