Thanks Vijaya! The picture reminded me of the entrance to many of our provincial parks…whichall have these gatehouses at the front to welcome visitors.
Thanks Caitlin! These are my childhood camping summers captured in haiku! The buzzing of the cicadas always take me back…plus I like brevity 🙂
Just read this again, Ingrid! From the title to the timelessness woven throughout this piece, it is perfect to submit, Ingrid! It is a really gorgeous poem!
Thanks Siobhan! I just added an article “a” to the first line and an en dash to the second for emphasis and I think it is good to go! Thanks for your feedback!
I love this one, Ingrid.
Thanks Vijaya! The picture reminded me of the entrance to many of our provincial parks…whichall have these gatehouses at the front to welcome visitors.
Ah Ingrid! Love it!
Thanks Skay 🙂
Lovely, Ingrid. It’s so good to have you back this year.
Beautiful and succinct. Elicits a variety of visual memories, times and places. A great example of universality in a poem. Thank you.
Thank you Sarah!!! I love your poetry and many of your images resonate with me as I mentioned in my comments. Have a wonderful poetry marathon.
So gentle and you can sense the quiet beauty. Really lovely piece, Ingrid!
Thank you Siobhan! I wrote this fairly quickly but with a head and heart full of wonderful memories of past summers.
I love how much you manage to capture with brevity here!
Thanks Caitlin! These are my childhood camping summers captured in haiku! The buzzing of the cicadas always take me back…plus I like brevity 🙂
Just read this again, Ingrid! From the title to the timelessness woven throughout this piece, it is perfect to submit, Ingrid! It is a really gorgeous poem!
Thanks Siobhan! I just added an article “a” to the first line and an en dash to the second for emphasis and I think it is good to go! Thanks for your feedback!