I know this was the final hour and lots of poems reflected a need to sleep and stop writing. However, I love that this poem is universal, reflecting the satisfaction of an unnamed task completed; how it took so much effort and strength that rest is required, desired, and deserved. 🙂
Such significant three lines! 🙂
Lol. Thank you. I had checked out to lala land as i scribbled that
haha succinct and i think reverberates with everyone on this journey
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I know this was the final hour and lots of poems reflected a need to sleep and stop writing. However, I love that this poem is universal, reflecting the satisfaction of an unnamed task completed; how it took so much effort and strength that rest is required, desired, and deserved. 🙂
Exactly 🙂
congrats you made it through!
Congrats to you too mehn 🥂✨️
I can think of no better words to end a poetry marathon on. In those three short lines you say all that needs to be said.
Your collection of poems this year are quite simply outstanding, thank you for sharing.
I see you.
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Thanks Darren!
Short and simple still captures the journey. love it.
🙏🙏🙏🙂
Precise and deep