I am everything I said I would never be
I am anger
I am pain
I am revenge
I am cold
I am vindictive
I am the new me
No one ever said that would be what happens
Once your world is torn apart and broken
Truths are shattered and lying on the ground
Everything you are becomes everything you were
I am me….
‘I am everything I said I would never be …’
How true and how painful. Thank you.
I like this. It’s contemplative, raw, and honest. Not many can handle that but most all can relate to it.
I am everything I said I never would be . . . .
What a fabulous first line!
Yes, it grabs the attention for a poem, but wouldn’t that also be a fine start to a novel?
Love this … especially the powerful first line.
wow… a great start indeed! really love this one, totally agree with other comments.
Thank you all so much for the awesome feedback. It is greatly appreciated.
In this first poem, you reveal that intensity in you that flows effortlessly into the 11 poems that follow
Thank you so much for the kind feedback 🙂