The ice forms so effortlessly here
bringing winter into the view
seasons changing with each day
helping shape tomorrow
never backing down
staying so true
magical
honest
free.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
The ice forms so effortlessly here
bringing winter into the view
seasons changing with each day
helping shape tomorrow
never backing down
staying so true
magical
honest
free.
I want to believe it was your intention to write this poem in the shape of an icicle (do correct me if I’m wrong!). I have that hope because you started your poem with “The ice forms so effortlessly here,” which makes me think of the part of an icicle where it’s attached to the surface it hangs from, and the poem narrows as an icicle would, which I think is awesome!
That was a true accident HAHA. But I am quite excited about it now that you pointed it out.
It is cool….
I love your Nonet! It is perfect form for the icicle.
Beautiful. What a perfect poem for the prompt!