Dark firs and spruces
fall in order down the hill
and drape the checkpoint
in mute darkness.
Mists roll desolate,
hanging,
within one’s touch
floodlit by a single beam,
which lights benighted borderlands,
tempting new beginnings
far from the calm comforts of the past.
Invitation or reprimand?
Author: Jane Eckford
2nd September 2023
I enjoyed reading this poem, providing precise and relevant words to the visual.
Thank you for this lovely feedback. My first comment on my first attempt at the marathon.