Codes
Away from the storefronts and skyscrapers, the forest ranger waits
for his bread to bake – sourdough twists, a hint of lemon, a taste
that brings him back to life. He rubs the night from his eyes, tucks his green
shirt in his pants, puts on one worn boot after the other. His belt
buckle glimmers, a Kentucky horse racing in the small sliver
of light from his curtains’ crack. He hears the birds playing, preying,
mating, wishing he had one of his own. He shakes the thought and slinks
out the door, down his stairs, walks to his shed and puts in the code.
With a chirp, the door sparks open, his Jeep a deep forest color
waiting for him to ride, the beating drum he’s born to play. He spits
on his sleeve and rubs off some dirt. He hops in, locks the door, forgetting
his enemies only have paws. With his head in the clouds, as his past
girls would say, he zooms off into the day, helping, saving, rescuing
furry lives and the only hearts that promised him they’d always stay.
This is always one of my favourite prompts, as the variety of the poems written are usually fascinating when compared.
I love the way you’ve written this, the structure and use of colour are wonderful, the alliterative techniques are also really nicely mixed and the flow of the poem from line to line is wonderful as it carries you through the entire poem. The lines roll off of your tongue as you speak them aloud and the narrative overall is of such an interesting and well told story, I am left wanting to know more about this forest ranger.
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Darren Syme Coremans (@dscoremans)
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