Still
I want you as the morning stills, birds not
yet singing their songs, clouds still unformed, hiding
beneath the red horizon, waiting.
I want you as the noon shines down, blaring
like a trumpet’s call, paws and feet pounding
against the soft and hardened ground.
I want you as the sky turns to gray turns
to black, and stars begin to swirl, as the dust settles
for the night, ready to rise again day after day.
“Still” is a favorite… nicely presented here; your spacing and cadence are quite interesting, lending a timelessness to the unresolved endpoint (‘day after day ‘) you wrote
oh my, what a touching piece, haunting.