Running round and round in circles meeting all the needs and wants and things she never can succeed
Years of running pass with more needs unmet as time elapsed never can she succeed
Surrender came when she believed that hers were all the needs to heed nevermore would she be running
Your poem built to the last stanza! Surrender is a strong word and you show her courage right there! Well done!
Thank you for taking the time to read and provide the kind comment.
Well done — this gets to things that are so important, and yet so often unsaid, all with musical language that works so well to draw the reader through the poem.