His joy spills out in rumbling,
and deep, rolling peals
Hers reminds me of
fizzing and bouncing,
Like those wonderful bath bombs
Hers is soft and bubbly, sometimes
exploding into rhythms of squeals, leaving
no question of delight.
Their little one attempts to mimic both.
She is occasionally successful and always in her own style.
Grandma’s came higher-pitched,
through her nose and made her belly jiggle.
Grandpa’s joy came from deep in his chest
and made his whole body shake!
If you were in another room,
you could know who was happy
by the sound of their voice.
Memories made of joyful sounds last forever.
Dear Kat Kidder.
Warm wishes from Johannesburg, South Africa.
I really enjoyed your poem.
Your descriptions were so vivid that I could hear the ” laughter”.
Thank you. This was a sweet challenge.
I appreciated your way of tackling this prompt with so many sensory details that evoke an image of the person laughing. I loved this simile: ‘Like those wonderful bath bombs’.