I love the imagery of this haiku…”Shake the earth, spring winds”. This line came to life for me and Icould feel that warm but fierce wind! “Break away the dead and dying”- Beautiful imagery and alliteration! I hope you submit this poem! It is very powerful!
I love the imagery of this haiku…”Shake the earth, spring winds”. This line came to life for me and Icould feel that warm but fierce wind! “Break away the dead and dying”- Beautiful imagery and alliteration! I hope you submit this poem! It is very powerful!