What if
Jack Kerouac
met
Robert Frost
on a road
well traveled
but with still enough
cachet amongst
contemplative
vagabonds
to capture the
moments
inherent in
going
‘he went thataway’
– Mark L. Lucker
© 2019
http://lrd.to/sxh9jntSbd
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
What if
Jack Kerouac
met
Robert Frost
on a road
well traveled
but with still enough
cachet amongst
contemplative
vagabonds
to capture the
moments
inherent in
going
‘he went thataway’
– Mark L. Lucker
© 2019
http://lrd.to/sxh9jntSbd
I love this
Thank you!
I really like the way you bring Kerouc and Frost together on the road. It seems likely an unlikely pairing but I love it bc it works thematically with an idea of “the journey”
I love the cheekiness & playfulness of this idea. Very clever bringing two writers both recognised for their road art.
My only reservation is I feel the payoff last line could be stronger, punchier