Mr. Fix It
If it’s broken, he’ll
repair it, make it better
than brand new. He’ll
put the pieces back together,
unless you’re what fell apart.
(A tanka is a five line poem with the syllable count 5/7/5/7/7.)
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If it’s broken, he’ll
repair it, make it better
than brand new. He’ll
put the pieces back together,
unless you’re what fell apart.
(A tanka is a five line poem with the syllable count 5/7/5/7/7.)
Love it! Great form for this piece. Made me laugh, also got the seriousness of the final line. Different take each time I read it. Nicely done!
Simply cool!
Terrific use of the form and relating to the human condition. Well done!