Hips Don’t Lie But Your Eyes Do
I saw the
flickering flame
of
desire
burning brightly
in your eyes,
heard your heartbeat
pick up
the
pace
every time
she walked by.
You once looked
at me
that
way,
with stars
in your eyes.
Time has taken
its toll
upon
my
broken body,
but I’m still
the same inside.
Let love
reignite
ashes
of passion,
long since dead.
(A hay(na)ku is a three line poem where the only rule is that the first line is made up of one word, the second line of two words, and the third line of three words. A reverse hay(na)ku is a three line poem composed in the opposite manner, so line one would be three words, line two is two words, and line three would be just one word. During the 2019 Poetry Marathon, I combined these two styles to create what I called the “mirror hay(na)ku”. This time, I have taken things a step further with the “Hall of Mirrors Hay(na)ku”, which is composed of five separate mirror hay(na)ku stanzas.)
This is a call for love encased in cool imageries.
Nice!
Fantastic poem. I like the rhythm and Imagery