Whispers of courage
fill each drop of rain
until they become
a force to sustain
life and fill each with
whispers of courage
breath of heaven
and strength to forage
a future replete
with newness of life
whispers of courage
confidence in strife
the strife to overcome
and to discourage
environmental crises
whispers of courage
I love the rhyme in this. It works really well with your refrain. It made the rhythm enjoyable while also touching on the subject of the environment issues
Wow, good job. And you were even able to put the rhyme in it. Loved it.
I agree with Timothy and wrenx – this works so well and what a beautiful repeating line: whispers of courage’!