Write about a time when you wish you had said “yes”
Migration brought us together
much older than me, we
understood each other,like
a sister and brother-
he joined the army and went
to war-served well and won
an honor, then one day he
asked me -“If I proposed would
you say YES’ ?
I excitedly tried to say “Yes”
but all I made was a mess.
This brought a tear to my eyes
I like it. Makes me want more of the story. Gives just enough to intrigue. Nice writing.
Thank you