15/24 a haiku Posted on August 14, 2016 1:31am EDT by Angel Rosen I showed you holy, you showed me purity’s price then you showed me holes
Absolutely beautiful. So many emotions – and such power – captured in this tiny haiku. Beautiful! Reply
I want to resist the Christian imagery and think of a more general, universal sense of purity. Everything as its price. Are you willing to help me struggle with this? It is my own personal journey. Reply
Great form and I love the alliteration. Beautiful word choice and subject. Great job Angel!
Absolutely beautiful. So many emotions – and such power – captured in this tiny haiku. Beautiful!
I want to resist the Christian imagery and think of a more general, universal sense of purity.
Everything as its price. Are you willing to help me struggle with this? It is my own personal journey.