Waiting can be painful
if you aren’t sure of the reason
you are in the prison
for the season
but the moment you know
and you can see
it is pure ecstasy
like an unfruitful couple
gifted with twin diamonds
after 20 years
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Waiting can be painful
if you aren’t sure of the reason
you are in the prison
for the season
but the moment you know
and you can see
it is pure ecstasy
like an unfruitful couple
gifted with twin diamonds
after 20 years
This has the quality of great poetry. It is powerful and poignant, yet short and succinct. The depth of emotion you have weaved through these lines is wonderful.
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This is ponderful (no, that is not a misspelling; it’s a word I just now created to express that this is something to ponder about, with the connotation of it being wonderful–which has its own connotation of pondering about the wonder of something)! Nice job!
Beautiful!
Oh my goodness this poem is so powerful. I absolutely love it. Waiting can be painful. You painted a pretty picture of patience for me. 20years of waiting! Wow just wow!
Amazing 👏🏾 Beautifully succinct.
Very crisp and straight to the point
Beautiful message 🌹