Oh I am wandering
Yogini
Drank a cup of
this intoxicated
Love
What the heck
Happened to
My heart?
I drank this cup
And now I live
Fully and
Whole heartily
In one moment
I lived centuries
Why did I
Contacted this
Illness?
A wave of ecstasy
swept over me
And I drank
The whole
Universe !
My heart is
Overwhelmed
And I renounced
My mind
Defilments
Now nothing
Affects me
Nothing
Strikes
My heart
I don’t
Give voice
To my pain
Oh I am wandering
Yogini
Drank a cup of
this intoxicated
Love
What the heck
Happened to
My heart?
I drank this cup
And now I live
Fully and
Whole heartily
In one moment
I lived centuries
Seema, this one is nice! loved it!
I enjoyed the movement in this one. And your final point, going back up to the start
“In one moment
I lived centuries”
Loved this part:
“Oh I am wandering
Yogini
Drank a cup of
this intoxicated
Love”
And that ending is great!!
Solid … could do with a trim I think to make it that little bit tighter
Very nice feelings in this one
Love those bits:
“Drank a cup of
this intoxicated
Love”
…
“In one moment
I lived centuries”
…
“And I drank
The whole
Universe !”