One more for the road
Crash and burn
Crash and burn
Not so fast
One more to go
Here it is
One more for the road
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
One more for the road
Crash and burn
Crash and burn
Not so fast
One more to go
Here it is
One more for the road
You’ve created a real tension in this poem – driving forward with the repetition of that dangerous phrase that we know so well in other contexts – ‘one more for the road’ and yet pulling back with ‘Not so fast.’ I like this!