Moments slip by in the blink of an eye,
Minutes to hours, then days have gone by.
Look up from your screen at the people who are near,
time is quite precious, let your feelings be clear.
Kindness is needed, treat others with respect,
Let’s be the difference that’s needed,
Let’s give others our best.
This poem is sweet and it made me smile! I am a fan of the rhyming couplet and this poem had some lovely rhyming couplets. Just a suggestion for the third line…remove words “who are.” Do you think it flows better? Great poem and subject!
thanks! great suggestion as well.
“Look up from your screen at the people who are near” So needed these days! Creative, gentle reminder!
thanks!