Poem No. 2 Posted on June 26, 2021 12:43pm EDTJune 30, 2021 5:56am EDT by sundarwalker Poem No. 2 Yellow Irises in my Pond glow on a cloudy dull grey day Lilies are still waiting patiently. —– Sundar
I appreciate the build and rhythm here: such a clear image in the first line, made animate in the second, and then the contrast of the third line. Reply
I appreciate the build and rhythm here: such a clear image in the first line, made animate in the second, and then the contrast of the third line.
Very clear and full of feeling