I drove away and left
you standing there, staring.
I, resolute, right,
and short on sight.
It is the silent
information we miss
that later makes us long
for that forgotten kiss.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
I drove away and left
you standing there, staring.
I, resolute, right,
and short on sight.
It is the silent
information we miss
that later makes us long
for that forgotten kiss.
This poem forced me to remember all those times I failed to be kind, and immediately regretted it.
The first four lines and last four lines seem to have a different purpose and style, and I wonder if there should be some separation between them?
Beautiful! I love your rhyming scheme. The poem flowed very well. I also loved your use of alliteration for emphasize/ and to make this great poem lyrical. Beautiful and poignant
information we miss
that later makes us long
for that forgotten kiss.!
…My favourite lines-beautiful imagery and design to this poem…don’t change a thing!