2 thoughts on “Failures of Kindness

  1. This poem forced me to remember all those times I failed to be kind, and immediately regretted it.

    The first four lines and last four lines seem to have a different purpose and style, and I wonder if there should be some separation between them?

  2. Beautiful! I love your rhyming scheme. The poem flowed very well. I also loved your use of alliteration for emphasize/ and to make this great poem lyrical. Beautiful and poignant
    information we miss
    that later makes us long
    for that forgotten kiss.!
    …My favourite lines-beautiful imagery and design to this poem…don’t change a thing!

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