…but I need a shower
Trust me
you’ll be much more willing
to take me personally afterward
if you want
no pressure
I’ll stop talking now
*****
Where do you keep the soap?
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
…but I need a shower
Trust me
you’ll be much more willing
to take me personally afterward
if you want
no pressure
I’ll stop talking now
*****
Where do you keep the soap?
That is what writing poems for 15 hours will do to you! Shower up and keep writing!
Aw, he’s sweet! And something very interesting happens during that line of asterisks that obviously changes them both. Fun play on “take personally” in two different juxtaposed meanings. Endearing characters, both the speaker and the invisible other half of the conversation.