Hour 2–65 Years Ago

Back when the pants she wore were called dungarees

the tomboy and I roughhoused in the backyard at Bradley’s house

where a trellis produced white roses you could eat, so I was told

I had suspected a trick

but they tasted sweet

Amid the grappling and grunting

suddenly a mystery scent arose

an odd presence reached from the soil beneath us

puzzling the space surrounding us

We stopped

looked at each other and moved apart

We didn’t wrestle again

 

 

 

One thought on “Hour 2–65 Years Ago

  1. Wow, this is fantastic! My take on this is an awareness of each other’s bodies that went beyond wrestling like two puppies and created discomfort and unease, though there are different directions in meaning the poem could take to others because of its subtlety. You capture that elusive poetic quality that is so difficult to create for many poets, that sweet spot of ambiguity and almost understanding on the part of the reader. Lovely.

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