3 thoughts on “Fairest of them

  1. There is something very personal about this poem. I felt it, and if I were the woman to whom it was written, I would be very touched and uplifted that someone could acknowledge I still had beautiful qualities even though I am no longer young. The line that that starts with Adventures is in the passive voice. If you shift it to active, I think it will fix the awkward rhythm

    1. Thank you so much for your input, I appreciate you. I tried to and hope it’s active enough now.
      It is quite personal, yes. Glad you could read between the lines too.
      You most definitely are a beauty…your spirit shines through in your words. ❤️❤️

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