Bed under the sky,
Lying supine, opened eyes.
Patterns of the leaves,
Painting the azure with green,
Heaven was brought down for me.
Note: Tankas are written in the structure of 5,7,5,7,7 syllables respectively.
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Bed under the sky,
Lying supine, opened eyes.
Patterns of the leaves,
Painting the azure with green,
Heaven was brought down for me.
Note: Tankas are written in the structure of 5,7,5,7,7 syllables respectively.
I enjoyed your poem. The poem is very visual.