9 thoughts on “Hour 24 – Nostalgia

  1. This is beautiful! You capture the fragility of the old man perfectly – and I love the idea of his creating words to go out in his stead. Love it!

  2. Beautiful! I love your gorgeous use of imagery and metaphor…I love the way you describe an okd man’s ramblings…”I could hear his words
    building an enterprise of his senses
    To go out and act on his behalf.” This links perfectly with the title “Nostalgia.” Beautiful! I love it- don’t change a thing!

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